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Too Much of a Good Thing

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Too Much of a Good Thing (Vore)

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"Well, well, look who we have here?" The Serperior giggled as she swung her soon-to-be meal by the ankle.

"Let me go, you green snake!" Draco exclaimed as she was swung back and forth.

"Not so fast," Jalorda responded as she looked at Draco's lavender hair. Using her vine, she wrapped the human around the waist, before bringing her feet closer to her face.

"W-what are you doing?" Draco stuttered as Jalorda used her other vine to pull off Draco's sneaker.

"We don't want sneakers bruising my throat, do we?"

"W-what?!" Draco exclaimed as she helplessly watched Jalorda pull off the other sneaker. "Why?!"

"I can sense you are a special one, Draco." Jalorda commented as she sniffed Draco's bare feet. Without warning, Jalorda slipped Draco's feet into her mouth, allowing her serpent-like tongue to travel along the base of Draco's feet.

"What the heck?!" Draco shouted as she tried to pull her feet from the Pokémon's mouth, but to no avail. Draco could feel Jalorda bite gently down on her ankles, as the serpent's mouth covered her feet in a coat of saliva.

"You have a very tangy flavor. I enjoy it." Jalorda commented as she moved Draco's feet to the back of her mouth, allowing her ankles and part of her shins enter her mouth. Because her feet touched the back of Jalorda's mouth, the entrance to Jalorda's throat opened up, eagerly taking in Draco's feet.

"Jalorda, release my feet!" Draco cried out in frustration as Jalorda took in Draco's thighs greedily.

"Why would I, when they are down my throat?" Jalorda teased as Draco began to struggle by kicking at Jalorda's throat. This proved useless, only forcing Draco to fall deeper into Jalorda's throat.

Seeing there was no way to change Jalorda's mind, Draco looked helplessly at Jalorda as she took in Draco's hips. Her feet, along with her ankles and knees, we're somewhere deep inside Jalorda's throat.

Seeing defeat in Draco's expression, Jalorda smiled at her winning. She lifted her head upwards, forcing Draco to look down at the serpent.

"I win." Jalorda smiled as Draco's stomach and hands entered her mouth. Draco could feel her feet press against something, before her feet were moved into Jalorda's stomach.

"No you don't!" Draco shouted as she began to wriggle and squirm about, causing her to fall deeper into Jalorda's greedy gullet.

"Give up, Draco. You can't push your way out; your hands are with your stomach. You can't pull your way out; your not a Pokémon." Jalorda giggled as Draco's chest entered Jalorda's mouth. Looking over her shoulder, Draco watched as her stomach and hands entered Jalorda's throat, traveling in smaller bulges.

"I won't give up! I never give up!" Draco shouted as she began to wiggle, only causing her head to quickly enter her mouth. Jalorda took her time covering Draco in saliva, sealing her fate. Draco felt Jalorda tip her head backwards, taking one large swallow. Draco felt herself being pulled through Jalorda's throat, before landing in her stomach.

"I told you I'd win." Jalorda giggled as Draco began to struggle against her stomach walls. Muffled shouts of protest could be heard from within, but they were drowned out from the gurgling noises Draco caused.

'That was an appetizer, but what can I have for a beefy meal?' Jalorda thought to herself as she slithered to a nearby bush. Hiding in the bushes, Jalorda saw a Haxorus munching on a nearby berry bush.

'Perfect beefy lunch.' Jalorda thought gleefully as the Pokémon moved towards her bush. Waiting for a minute, she lunged towards the Pokémon, knocking it over. Quickly, she used her vines to wrap around the Pokémon before it could protest.

"What are you doing?!" The Pokémon growled as Jalorda gave him a smirk.

"You're going to be my next meal." She replied before opening her mouth, showing the Haxorus her pink gums. Slowly, she placed her mouth over the Pokémon's head, before closing it. Covering him in a think coating of saliva, she began to engulf his neck, forcing his head into her throat. She spent little time on his neck, before engulfing his shoulders.

As the Haxorus's head reached Jalorda's stomach, he saw Draco lying in the space.

"Move, human." He growled, causing her to sit up.

"Make me, then." Draco replied, holding her ground.

Jalorda already had Haxorus's head, neck and shoulders in her throat and stomach, and was quickly working on his thighs. She used her tail to push his feet into her mouth, forcing his thighs into her throat. Jalorda could feel her stomach expanding, but she continued, lifting her head upwards so Haxorus's tail could enter her mouth. Closing it gently over his tail, she took one large swallow, forcing his tail into her throat. Another swallow, and he was inside her stomach. Jalorda sighed as she watched her stomach expanding to match Haxorus's size.

"I told you to move." Haxorus growled as he stared daggers at Draco.

"Make me." Draco repeated, her face showing anger.

"You asked for it." Haxorus growled, before engulfing Draco's head and shoulders into his mouth. Because Draco was already covered in saliva, he quickly swallowed her head and shoulders, along with her stomach and thighs. He reapplied a coating of saliva on Draco's knees and shins, but quickly swallowed her feet.

Unlike Jalorda's stomach, Draco was forced to curl up in Haxorus's stomach. She began to kick at his stomach walls, yelling at him to free her. Haxorus replied with a belch and a sigh as he smiled at his squirming belly.

'That was the best lunch ever.' Jalorda smiled as she slowly slithered over to a tree. She lied there for a moment, watching her stomach as it moved around for a moment, before she wondered, 'My stomach looks small. Maybe the Haxorus devoured the human as well?'

Looking around the tree, Jalorda noticed a Charmelon relaxing in the sun. Slowly, she approached the Charmelon, before carefully taking his head into her mouth. The Pokémon jumped, causing Jalorda to close her mouth, preventing the Charmelon from escaping. Taking no time at all, Jalorda engulfed the Charmelon's chest and arms, forcing his head into her throat.

Haxorus heard the commotion, and decided that he would join in on the fun. He wiggled his way over to the entrance of Jalorda's throat, and held his mouth open. He wondered what Jalorda was swallowing, and if he could fit it inside his own stomach. He took a quick glance at his stomach; it still wiggled about.

Jalorda had devoured most if Charmelon, except his feet. She used her vine to push his feet in, and closed her mouth, before tilting her head to swallow him whole. She sighed as she watched her new meal's bulges slowly travel down her throat.

Inside, as Jalorda's throat opened up to allow Charemlon into the stomach, Haxorus opened his mouth, forcing the Charmelon into his mouth. It took no time at all for the poor Charmelon to slide into Haxorus's throat, as Haxorus began to swallow as soon as Charmelon touched the back of his mouth.

"Please don't devour me," The Charmelon pleaded, but it was already too late; Haxorus was already beginning to devour the poor Pokémon. After the Pokémon was in his throat, Haxorus watched with glee as the bulges in his throat traveled down to his already bloated belly, causing it to expand even more. Haxorus groaned as his belly grew twice its size, before it began to wobble back and forth.

"Please stop squirming," Haxorus groans as his stomach is kicked at from the inside. Jalorda lies on the grass, happy that she has had a full-course meal.
I have no idea what happened with this writing. It was all over the place, and I am surprised I didn't die from having to write this. But if it is hard to understand, here's what happened:
Jalorda devours Draco
Jalorda devours Haxorus
Haxorus devours Draco 
Jalorda devours Charmelon
Haxorus devours Charmelon right after Jalorda
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